Hey! Just checking in here. I have just started my first editing pass on novel #1, Rasere’s War. In this pass, I’ll clean up sentences that seem awkward to me and rewrite or add more material to make it synch better with the follow-on novel, We Built This City. I can definitely see how much my writing has changed between the first and second novel.

After my edits, I’ll need some beta readers to offer their inputs on story flow, content, and character development.


Oh, I have registered my pen name with Godaddy and have set up a temporary website. I’m not ready to show it yet as I have yet t figure out what format I want the website to be in.